The night we met

Three small chapters broken by little cliff hangers for tension and pacing. Crash landing. New climates and architectures. An Alien place confirmed. Protagonist’s situation revised. The tense meeting of familiar character 1 and previously glanced at foreign character 2. First impressions of one another before our hero makes another run for it, falling foul of some lesser foreigners, buggering some more things up in his pathological bid to escape culpability…

Editing notes: Usual line edits, polish and momentum.

Keyword style impressions: crash, Humidity, indignant-yet-blase murder, ill-advised lairyness

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